hi, all. okay, i'm new at this, and i kinda wanted to get into it, so please be gentle. many thanks to happyme for patiently working me through all this slowly. i'm jen, and i'm a sophomore. i'd appreciate feedback in a positive way, since i've been getting a lot of negative feedback recently, and i did give this week's challenge a try. i like number one slightly more than number two, but here goes.
(text was English 111 Vivace)
(text was Gill Sans Ultra Bold and French Script)
i hope one of these days, i'll be able to be as good as you people :-)
♥jen
[edit:]
whitestar made some helpful comments on fixing picture number two, so the fixed version is below. i hope it helped.