the text says "alone in a crowd", by the way.
i kind of like this, except i feel like the pink is a bit light, and also you can't see the crowd behind her.
so i moved the text, but that seems to make delenn look bigger and amplify the empty space at the same time.
so i put the text back and dulled down the pink down to a purple, but that makes her hand look really bright, and i think i have the wrong shade of purple.
i could just put the text down lower, but then you wouldn't be able to read the "alone" part.
of course, i could just change the texts and try something else, but i kinda liked the way this started.
and then my eyes started to hurt. so i was hoping i could get some feedback and critique on them. i haven't had much spare time lately, or sleep, so they do kind of suck a bit compared to everyone else's. but okay. thanks.